Archive | 10.03.2010
- Can I Love? Ch. 03
"The third chapter... keep commenting and voting. There is no way I can improve if you don't let me know what I'm doing wrong."
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The next few days went by slowly. My thoughts only on the man who held me so tight, the man I longed to hold. Every time the phone rang, my heart would be leaping in my chest. All I wanted was to hear from this man, the man that made me feel so special inside. Stupid as it was, since he told me he loved me, I couldn't think about much else. It was a day long relationship. ... more
- Can I Love? Ch. 08
"Hi guys, thanks for voting, it really helps me with my writing. I am so glad people are happy with the way i write. Thanks for commenting and voting and don't forget to keep it up. It only takes a second."
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"I looked down at the envelope, processing the words. Flipping it over, I opened it, pulling out the letter. Unfolding the sheet I started to read aloud."
Sarah,
I have started writing many letters to you, each one awful in its own sense. Words to try and make you forgive ... more